HERE I GAVE YOU ESSAY ON RETHEORTIC ANALYSIS. CAN YOU ADDSOMETHING MORE TO MAKE

HERE I GAVE YOU ESSAY ON RETHEORTIC ANALYSIS. CAN YOU ADDSOMETHING MORE TO MAKE MY ESSAY GOOD. BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT IS NOTPROPER. ITS HAVING MISTAKES AND NEED MORE BRIEFLY. CAN YOU DO ITFOR ME PLEASE? MESSAGE ME. LET ME KNOW. I NEED UNTILL TOMORROW .HERE IS ATTACHMENT.