I Have an argument eesay Aboutlosing weightby diet or surrgierI support The diet

I Have an argument eesay Aboutlosing weightby diet or surrgierI support The diet sidethe edit i need in this essay isput an example that shows i have a good experience with dietI have a example in my essay i highlight it in green.try to keep it in the way that i wrote but in sametime try to chage it to support diet.i highlight the area that need work in yellow. ( use the same sourses that i used )KEEP THE CONCLUSIN BUT TRY TO EXTAND IT TO MAKE THE ESSAY IN 5 FULL Pgsuse plz easy words as english is my second language ad keep it in same my writing style easy word and sentance with good grammer.i attached my promt and my essaydo not use words ( you alot thing )the essay due in 12 hrs the essay should be in 5 pgs mla form