I need someone that is willing to revise an essay. It is very important to maintain this paper that I attach but to revise it according to the instructions. I will attach both the paper and the instrucitons but need to stick to the initial paper topic and most of what is writtne. Revising per the comments listed are necessary and the APA format is very very important. the references are not listed alphabetical and is not fully APA but need to be. Again this is a revision that is very important. The paper so far has not recieved a better grade than a C- and I really need it to be better than that. The instructions for the paper are below.If you are the person that can make this happen please let me know. If not please do not. I only want very serious candidates