I WAS TRYING TO DESCRIBE MY HOUSE AS MY FAVORITE PLACE I NEED SOMEONE TO REVIEW

I WAS TRYING TO DESCRIBE MY HOUSE AS MY FAVORITE PLACE I NEED SOMEONE TO REVIEW IT AND MAKE IT BETTER I HAVE ATTACHED MY DESCRIPTION I NEED MORE DETAILS YOU CAN MAKE THEM UP IF YOU WANT.Assignment:Remember your topic sentence should present the specific place as well as the feeling/emotion being there creates within you.Also be sure that your love it or leave it has 3 parts:1. A very specific place as its primary focus2. Several specific sensory details that creates an exact image of your place for the reader.3. A clear indication of how the place makes you feel which is also the mood of the PARAGRAPH.Remember: U need to take us to the place and help us feel what you do.