Revision of Expository EssayTeachers feedback:This is a great expository essay.

Revision of Expository EssayTeachers feedback:This is a great expository essay. I liked your organizationI actually learned a lot about your subject because of the way you framed your paper. The tone was overall appropriate and I see that you have a firm grasp of this mode of writing. Your grammar and spelling were spot on. You have a strong intro that draws the reader in. To improve the essay: this essay reads like a textbook entry and needs more description to draw the reader in. You can use examples or anecdotal stories to make the main points. I look forward to reading the revision.Revision of Expository Essay 1Revise your first expository essay (from Week 5).Argumentative EssayCompose and submit a 1000+ word argumentative essay.Both assignments will be submitted to turnitin.com no plagarism. Rubrics for both assignments is attached. as well as the original copy of the expository essay.