The Commentary rough draft here you need to check my commentswhat i got an this

The Commentary rough draft here you need to check my commentswhat i got an this assignment. This draft has so manygrammar and mechanics problems that it is confusing and unclear.Please revise the essay and improve the clarity grammar andmechanics as much as possible. Then submit the essay again forfeedback and grading. Email me directly if you have any questionsabout this request.